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SageofShadow: *turns back into Dan*

Dan: *frees the others* There you go overlanders you are free. *looks around* man, my alter-ego must have cleaned up here real nice

Fenix: good show, but you were being thrown around like a sac of potatoes.

Dan: whats potatoes?

Fenix: never mind. its an "Overlander" thing

Dan: ahh...

Teeg: so, are we going to the forboding forest?

Dan: yes...

OOC: the forest has Foreshadowing written all over it

BOT

Dan: we must move quickly, the trolls will regroup and slay us one by one.
 

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ooc: DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!! do you ever read other people's posts? first you go and no read fenix's post then you dont read my post! look

DAN IS IN A PRIZON CELL THAT THE GOBLINS PUT HIM IN! HE IS THERE WITH EVERYONE IN OUR GROUP BESIDES RAZIEL!!!! DO YOU UNDERSTAND!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!
 

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i think it would be fun if we did some lord of the ring style like this :p



the party runs off into the woods after 5 hours Fenix suddenly
implodes onto the ground
Dan : FENIX!!!!
Fenix : i dont feel well.. ugh.....auw....the medallion...it...is...doing....something...to me
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
*Fenix suddenly fades away*
the whole party :FENIX!!! NO!!!!!!
while the party mourns about Fenix suddenly a bunch of trolls appear , pissed off
Dan : not again
Arcturus : we are no match for them !!!!
Raziel : ill see bout that
the party starts fighting but are greatly losing the battle first is Dan knocked out against a tree . then Raziel breaks his leg and Arcturus is heavily wounded
Teeg : im the last man standing. o no
the trolls hone Teeg and one of them , bigger then the rest goes stand in front of the group
troll : " i am the son of the warlord...my father"
Teeg : "thats good for you"
troll : "you have brutally slaugthjered him and i will do the same with you"
troll raises his big axe and in mid-air he suddenly stops his sweep
*troll starts pitting out blood*
*troll falls on the ground*
Teeg : i cant believe it
Behind the troll stands Fenix.......but not the Fenix they used to know
Teeg : Fenix!!!!...BEHIND YOU!!!!
a troll tries to smah fenix but fenix just raises his hand and the troll flies high up in the sky and crashes 5 miles further in the woods
Teeg : hey.. i didnt know you could do that Fenix
*fenix kills all the trolls with ease*
Fenix goes stand in front of teeg and teeg looks at fenix
teeg *thinks in it self* fenix his eyes...are red....but normally they are blue . and that bright shine around him. and wus he that big 30 minutes ago?
Teeg : fenix...
Fenix : *interrupts* Fenix....thats how they used to call me . but i am not what you think i am
Teeg : but i tought you died
Fenix : i died... i died.... a long time ago. but i came back , cause we both knew we had a task to complete
Teeg : *thinks in himself* his voice sounds weird . there is something wrong...but what the : THE MEDALLION!!!!!! it ...it......is.....gone
Teeg: we both?
*Teeg sees the image of the medallion tattood on Fenix's skin*
Teeg : *puts his gun on Fenix's throath*
Teeg : whoever or whatever you are ..... give my friend his body back or youll live to regret it
Fenix : i am......his body
Teeg : what ... are you?
Fenix : any normal human like you would say : a medallion
but tell me... can medallions do whut i just did
*Teeg puts his guns away*
Teeg : how can i trust you?
Fenix : *normal voice and eyes turn normal again* Teeg...
Teeg : fenix ure back!!!! that medallion went all weird and stufv an....
Fenix : i know Teeg . i know , look Teeg : i am this medallion and this medallion is me
Teeg : you both...... but , who is that medallion
Fenix : that medallion is what i used to be . a fighter for justice
Fenix : did you see his power Teeg? did you see it
Teeg : incredible...
Fenix: *turns back into his alter ego , his medallion becomes a tattoo again*
Fenix : you know that i am not Fenix , i am a part of him . you can call me...
"the seventh sun....."
Teeg *sees fenix turning back to normal , the others wake up from their knockout*
Fenix : it is better that no one knows about this
Teeg : oke.....
Fenix : cmon guys lets go !!!!
Fenix heals the party and they leave
Teeg whuspers to Fenix : but....they knew u where dead . then why are they not amased to see u
Fenix : toughts...are easily manipulated
edit : yes where out of cave prison , sry for skipping this part but i was making a prison scene wich tells the same story (7th moon - fenix thingie) and i accidentaly deleted it but this part is very important !!!
 

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OOC: guess not anymore...

Arcturus: Damn! that hurt... my head still feel's like a banana squished by a mallet.
Raziel: Your not alone...
Fenix: Hmm we should get going.
Arcturus: Yeah we should but where to?
Fenix: We should find our way out of the forest... *states the obvious*
Arcturus: Right.

*The Party start walking through the forest path looking for an Exit while suddenly a creaking voice comes out of nowhere followed by a shut door*

Dan: What was that?
Fenix: Some kind of a Trap door closing.
Raziel: Do you think we should check? we were heading out.
Arcturus: Hmm... Maybe it's a trap? it might be one of the goblin treasury's that lead back to our warm prison cave... *says cinicly (spelled right?)*
Teeg: Guess we will never know untill we check this out...
*Fenix casts a small ilumination spell that sends out enough light to notice a wierd shaped bush with metal joints on it*
Arcturus: Very crude and stupid for a trap door, must be goblin's.

*The party get's near the Bush, only to find out that infact it is a bush*

Teeg: Trap door huh?
Arcturus: hey... *Interupted by Fenix*
Fenix: Shhh, i hear movment *Dispell's the ilumination spell*
????: I am so tierdy of work, all day we guarding big shiney's
????: I understand, me thinks so too
????: Are you idiots going somewhere?
????: ahem... *A sound of a whip crack, repeating itself a few times*
Teeg(whispers to Fenix):Sounds like fighting...
 

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Dan: oh great but thats not the least of our problems
Teeg: wudya mean?
Dan: i mean that there are some Sliths chasing us listen
Slith: ssssstupid humansssss
Fenix: great wut are these things?
Dan: the Slithzerkai, some of the most powerful fighters of the forest and cave realms.
Teeg: just when things couldent get worse.
 

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Originally posted by pyro_junky
ooc: ok i think i missed something i thought they were in a prizon cell
ooc , if u read my post u would know why . now ill repeat for you
"sry to skip the prison scene guys but this part is very important to the story"-trollwarlord2
now continue with the story !!!
 

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Arcturus: Life shoves a fist up your ass, look if we alarm the whatever is hitting those goblin guards he will call for backup or kick our asses or both but we cant really find our way in the dark out of here, but if we stay in here the Slith will surely find us. wow seems like only yesterday i was sleeping in my warm bad, and having a great stake on my plate oh and had plates...
Teeg:SHUT UP!! oops...
Fenix: Nice way of NOT alerting the Guard.
*A figure moves in the dark twoards the party*
Arcturus: I think its coming twoards us...
????: YOU! What are you doing out here!?
Party: ahem... well... we... ahh...
????: Never mind come with me down in the basement, this place will be crawling with Slith soon.
Dan: I dont know if we should trust him...
Fenix: He has no lie in his eye, we should follow.
*The Group and the strange man walk to the nearest tree, he pushes a button and one of the bushes opens up*
????: Come on, make haste!
(Down in the basement)
Arcturus(to self): wow! this place is full of gold! i wonder what is he doing in a place like this with this kind of riches...
????: Arcturus if im not mistaken, i am here because this gold belongs to almost all of the Tree and Cave dwellers around, and if the see me spending their money, no more explanation needed.
Arcturus: *in shock* what? how?... oooh you must be a Mind Reader, but your type of Magi live near the ocean shores and high lands, what are you doing here?
Ardean the Reader: well, first let me introduce myself i am Ardean, Ardean the Reader to some.
I am here because the Troll's have raided my village, and dont ask me how the got to the sea and why, dont know... would have found out thogh if one of you havent killed the chiftian.
Anyway, after the mass murder me and my friend were the only one's that survived we decided to go here and check for any clues, incase you want to know, he was the one beating up the goblin's for not doing their job's. i think he will be joining us soon, so anyway after i came here i have gone undercover as the troll's treasure keeper, then when i was about to find out what happend one of you killed the chiftian... as i said before.
 

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Dan: hmm these walls are very cumbersome we must keep quiet and careful.

Fenix: and we shall my friend

Dan: fenix, im going out for some air

Teeg: psh yea right. hes probably going to run away

Dan: *Eyes blaze black flames* i would NEVER run away from my comrades. Regardless if they have no wilderness lore or cave lore.

Teeg: Okay okay...

Dan: *eyes turn to normal* good i shall only be a moment.

Fenix: Stay hidden

Dan: *turns into pure shadows* dont worry i shall
 

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*Dan goes outside*
Fenix : mind readers......
?????? : call me Lex , i am a mind bender. i can make ppl think what i want hem to think
Arcturus: mind-reader , u cant bend minds
Lex : yes i can
Arcturus : show me
*Lex looks Arcturus in the eyes and after 2 minutes he turns away*
Lex : i cant.......bend......your mind........*mans himself* a weird force is protecting you
Fenix comes stand a little closer to Lex
*Lex sees the medallion*
Lex : NO.....NOOOOO
*Suddenly Lex draws a sword and wants to stab Fenix in the back , none of the party sees it*
Lex : DIE YOU *SNAP* .......
Lex falls on the ground
?????? : Be aware for the shadow ...... hahahaa
Fenix : *turns around* heheheh , i knew we would do that , i felth evil all over him
??????? : But how???
Fenix : Dan .... you can turn human again now
Dan turns back to human form
Teeg : if u knew it , then why didnt u respond when he was about to stab you?
Fenix : cause i allso felth Dans presence
Raziel : and why coudnt he bend Arcturus minds
Fenix : soo many questions young ones........ i am a man of less words
*Fenix shows the 7th sun*
Fenix : protects us against black magic
*suddenly the party hears warcries from Sliths*
Dan : did i mentioned that they found us?
Raziel : actually ....you didnt
Fenix : RUN!!!!!!!!
*party runs out of tree being followed on the heels with 50 sliths*
Dan and Teeg : running , running always running. why do we never fight?
Fenix : u can fight if u want . but i wont be there to dig ur grave
rest of party : you have a point

ps : to give our story a more visual i added a picture wich shows how a Slithzerkhai would look like
 

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sorry for the double posting , i needed to do it for the pic . sry, plz dont tell to moderators . i made a sumup of the story from we are now , and i put it in a text-file . this is like the "deluxe version of the story" (it has the prison scene wich we skipped in it
i think u guys would like it
edit : i cant post it right now . in progress hres a pic of how a slithzerkhai would look like
 

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Teeg (wile running) : just incase we do have to fight them what are our chances of winning?
Fenix (wile running) : not good enuf to risk it.
Teeg (wile running) : but dont forget you have me.
Fenix (wile running) : like i said befor if you want to fight go ahead but i will not help you.
Teeg (wile running) : ok fine.

OOC: i dont see any picture in that just the story
 

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OOC:actually, i couldnt see your pic so since i am the only one here who plays Exile I,II,III and Blades of Exile, this is a rough pic of wut they look like

BOT:
Dan: This may be interesting. Hmm... OVERLANDERS! DUCK!
Teeg: wha-Uuurg *Teeg get hit by a massive battering ram*
Raziel: TEEG! you okay?
Teeg: ....*silence*
Dan: told yall to duck...

Slith: PESSSKY HUMANSSS DISSSCOVERED USSS!!! KILL KILL KILL!

Dan: *starts to burn blue flames* Do...not...EVER...call me a mortal man RRRR.... HELLZONE GRENADE!!! *shoots many energy balls that home into the Sliths and combine into one mega bomb*

Fenix: I think we should run
Raziel: Wut about Teeg?
Fenix: carry him, we must move
Raziel: and of our pshychotic ranger friend?
Fenix: he can handle himself RUN!
 

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after a chase with no end Fenix his everwatcning eye spots something in the distance
(while running)
Fenix : o god.....
Teeg : what?
Fenix : lesser demons......over there
Raziel : just when things coudnt get worce.....
Fenix : There's a hole in there !!!! jump in it
*Party jumps in hole and the sliths who can see poorly in dark just run along*
Fenix : that was close
Dan : we still got a problem......*puts his head out of cave* there are like 50 demons there.
Teeg:*waking up* uuuuhhh........now this is something i feeled before.....damn my head...
Raziel : shut up !!! you want em to find us
*loud roars and slith screams mixed*
Raziel : there is blood running floawing into cave
*pointing at slith blood slowly folwing into cave*
Dan : you're not gonne tell me we are gonne sufficate in slith blood?
Fenix : we cant lea......
Teeg : everything rather then this *jumps out of cavesand gets noticed by the demons*
*Teeg realizes they are even taller then trolls*
Teeg *in itself* : i can be wrong however
Raziel : YOU IDIOT!!!!!
demons start chasing the party
Fenix : there.....is....no...point......in
...running , from....them. demons can ùarch day and night
Dan : to the cliff ! we will fight them there
Raziel:20 demons? may god help us all
*party goes stand on the hill seeing the demons approach*
Fenix : FOR THE SEVENTH MOON
*party roars and draws blades*
a bloody fight starts , i will devide this fight into four parts , for each char one , i will start with fenix
*when the demons where near* Fenix : SPLIT UP, LET NONE ALIVE
Fenix runs to a nearby cave and starts fighting 3 demons
Fenix : Creatures of darkness *hack* fear me * slash , there goes a demons head* cause i bare *slash ; another one* the light of Rezannor
*another 2 Greater demons appear*
give it up you will nevcer survive


OOC : when Fenix his alter ego (seventh sun) trakes over he will be talking in blue

FEAR ME!!!! * Fenix takes something from his backpack and it starts shining*
Fenix : Feel the light foul things of the Pits
*Demons running to Fenix scream and cover their eyes*
Fenix : RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA * casts Hidden Power of the Seventh Sun , a large thunderbolt comes down , frying 10 Demons
Fenix : 10 more to go......
Fenix runs to a ridge , immediately throwing 2 demons in it
*8 large demons appear*
Fenix : Masters of the fire....rulers of the pit.....
Demon : YOU CAN NEVER DEFEAT US!!!!!
Fenix : not on my own , no chance . but what if your allies became your enemies
Demon : what?????????????....NO!! YOU KNOW THE NAME OF...
Fenix : of Bulgor , one of the greatest of your kin

OOC : kowing the true name of a demon makes him become your ally

Fenix : BULGOR!!!! I CALL UPON YOU
*7 greater demons come out of the earth , with bulrog in front of them*
Bulrog:Fenix....you called me again.....dark have been my dreams lately....untill you told me my name and freed me from the darkness...ATTACK!! AMONS OF MINE!! ATTACK!!!

OOC : amon is a demon who has been told his true name , making him a creature of goodness (angel+demon)

*a bloody fight starts between the demons*
Fenix : *after some time**Fenix is glowing with a weird aura* Fulgor....stand back
*demons step aside *
Fenix uses tsunami leap on the group of demons , letting them fly into the canyon
Fenix : Demons......you shall serve the darkness no more
*Fenix jumps on a demon and looks him into the face*
Fenix : join the light side!!!!! Ugannor of Ulrundor !!!
*The demon starts to shine and has a happy face now *
Ugannor : I AM FREE, i will serve you untill eternity , Fenix of....
Fenix : i do not tell my name , call me Fenix
*Ugannor and his companions dissapear , together with Bulgor*
*Fenix now stares at the greatest demon*
Roar*-!!!!
*Fenix jumps on demon and tells him his name , demon dissapears*
Fenix : goodbye megazzo of merasso
Fenix : Teeg ! on your left


OOC : now Teeg his battle part begins , after that Raziel , then dan
 

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Teeg: time for some fun *draws his pistols and shoots one of the demons in the head and a part of its brain flys out the other side.* looks like I’m making this a messy one.
Demon: DIE HUMAN! *jumps on Teeg’s back holding him down wile others come to attack him. Teeg’s guns are knocked out of his hands and he reaches for the guns he stashed in his sock. He got his dagger and started stabbing as many demons as he could until they backed off.*
Teeg: owch, your going to pay for that. *jumps for his pistols and throws his dagger at one of the Demons, it hits him in the chest piercing its heart.*
Demom: aaaaaaaaaa...uugggg *falls on the ground dead.*
Teeg: take this! *starts shooting at the demons as the run towards him killing 3 more before his guns started making a clicking sound meaning he needed to reload* aw crap. *reaches in his pocket for some bullets but he used them all already. Before he could decied on what to do the demons started tackling him again. He tried knocking them off so he could go get his dagger, it wasn’t very smart of him to have thrown it to kill just one demon. Although there was only 3 left he couldn’t beat them without any weapons.* GET OFF OF ME YOU LITTLE CREEPS! *throws one off of him and gets up ignoring the other 2 banging on him. he runs as fast as he can for his dagger. When he gets it he stabs the 2 that were still attacking then throws it at the 3rd one killing it.* huff... huff... huff... I need some bandages. *he picks up his guns and dagger then sits down on a rock for a short rest.* this was one of my favorite shirts to *he grins*
 

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OOC message : i made another threadl ike this on another forums , just to see how different it would be
i dont want to promote it or anything like but hres the url , tought you guys would love it
ps : i love battleforums!!!!! I AM NOT SAYING THAT THAT FORUM IS BETTER
http://spellforce.jowood.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=11712
 

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u stole my avatar...

BOT: Dan: now its my turn. RRRRRAAARRRGG *a massive shockwave thunders around Dan killing a few enemies*
I am the swordsman supreme *cuts a troll's throut* Grrrraaaaarrrr *Transforms into The Sage of Shadows*
SoS: now it is my turn. *swoops down and kills a few trolls and sliths with his inner darkness* I am the One and the ONLY sage of shadows. Not some fakey white haired chick (Impa from LoZ OoT). *Transforms back into Dan
 

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OOC : yes i did steal it :cool: for another forum then this one it woudnt be so bad
 

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Arcturus: Thats it! your not stealing all the fun!!...
Oh great Anizghul (The ice folk god) lend your great strength to one of your true follower *a massive ice storm begins and kill's a few troll's then at the end of it a long staff is formd in arcturus's hands, arcturus becomes stronger and feels a magical power running through his blood*
Arcturus: Thank you Anzighul! Ha feel the strength of the ice folk!
*Sends a giant javelin twoards 6 trolls spiking them to death.
then he summons an ice drake to take out the remaining slith's*

Arcuturs: Fenix another demon is at presence take him out!
Seventh-sun: i know that. *Jumps up and lands behind the demon, a flash stun's everyone and after they recover they see the demon in pieces on the floor*

Teeg: now if we all had these powers why were we running again?
Arcturus: good point... *The staff shines and turns into a ring on arcturus's finger*
 
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