My essay i did on antarctica

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my essay on Antarctica Animal Life, Science and global warming​

ok mr mauley There isnt much Life form in antarctica because it is too icey and the water freezes so they cant drink much accept for penguins and Polar bears they can break into the ice and drink the icey cool water. Some people go to antarctica to study the ice and climate they say the galciers are melting because of global warming and if we do not do anything about this the earth will flood and australia will be the first to go because we are closest to antarctica
paragraph 2:
Now you may be wondering how these scienfific work stations run. ok well there are chefs hired to do the cooking and lots of people to do the jobs so they just let the scientists do there work without being interupted because imagine a scientist trying to cook haha.
paragraph 3
i do not believe that antarctica should be left alone so it will be safe for all animals i believe we need to research wat we can about this place because it is the human science and if we keep researching we will be really smart like star trek.
strong conclusion:
everything i just said in paragraph 3 +_the fact that we are in danger here with ice bergs melting we will flood and we will all die yes u and me will be DEAD

wat do u think i will get ??

 

[Metal Gear Flash]

A +

 

[x42bn6]

A+piece of crap*

 

[Amantis]

A decent essay on something like Global Warming and Antarctica requires at least 3000 words to be able to cover all the points.

- Amantis

 

[Vadriel]

Common misconception: Penguins are in Antarctica...polar bears are not. I think there ARE carnivorous seals though.

Due to your gross inaccuracy, I give you a "C-". That is, a "C" minus two more letter grades, which results in an "F".

 

[Johnny]

A+piece of crap*

Non-constructive criticism has gotten several people banned.

Overall I'd give it a solid B. Excellent topic, very relevant to today's problems. One or two grammatical errors. Don't forget a hook!!!

 

[Pains Requiem]

F .

 

[B~E]

No mention of Neu-Schwabanland and Operation Highjump? What the hell?

 

[Lizardbreath]

A+ would read again.

 

[Metal Gear Flash]

hey cheese if you ever write a book i want an autograph

 

[concrete_sox]

no problem i heard galatia is writing a book about d2 i heard its really good also thx for the positive replys

 

[Metal Gear Flash]

i want gallys autograph too

 

[concrete_sox]

that makes 2 of us

 

[Ntrik_]

is that an essay? or.. outline?

 

[concrete_sox]

it is an essay dude did u even pass grade 3

 

[Tacitblade]

I'm gonna give you a Nobel Prize, like Al Gore.

 

[Ninja_Blue]

I wrote a story about Chuck Norris, so I give you a B good sir.

 

[Induhvidual_1]

F. so bad, it's not even funny

 

[concrete_sox]

bad huh i dare u to wright an essay on this topic huh didnt think so

 

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my essay on Antarctica Animal Life, Science and global warming​

ok mr mauley There isnt much Life form in antarctica because it is too icey and the water freezes so they cant drink much accept for penguins and Polar bears they can break into the ice and drink the icey cool water. Some people go to antarctica to study the ice and climate they say the galciers are melting because of global warming and if we do not do anything about this the earth will flood and australia will be the first to go because we are closest to antarctica
paragraph 2:
Now you may be wondering how these scienfific work stations run. ok well there are chefs hired to do the cooking and lots of people to do the jobs so they just let the scientists do there work without being interupted because imagine a scientist trying to cook haha.
paragraph 3
i do not believe that antarctica should be left alone so it will be safe for all animals i believe we need to research wat we can about this place because it is the human science and if we keep researching we will be really smart like star trek.
strong conclusion:
everything i just said in paragraph 3 +_the fact that we are in danger here with ice bergs melting we will flood and we will all die yes u and me will be DEAD

wat do u think i will get ??

A sorry @$$ attempt at being funny? Lay off the drugs.