Childrens story
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Kuzmich
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Does it have to be true and related to the real events of Japanese medievel history, or do you just have to make it up?
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Well i am not gonna write 3 pages for you, but how about this:
The sun was rising, Yamamoto looked at the shining sky and his face was tired. All the night he had to spend cheking that samurai would be prepared for tommorows battle. They have chased those rebels for 7 moons, and today is the day then they reach them. The emperoros will must be done, the traitors must be dead. Yamamoto checked his sword, his armor, his helmet, all was good. He got up on the horse and rode to the camp.
Just make up more of this kind of shit, include some battles and you gonna get your three pages, use your imagination. Dont foget about having a couple of story twists, like the main character changes the side on which he fights, or does something else.
The sun was rising, Yamamoto looked at the shining sky and his face was tired. All the night he had to spend cheking that samurai would be prepared for tommorows battle. They have chased those rebels for 7 moons, and today is the day then they reach them. The emperoros will must be done, the traitors must be dead. Yamamoto checked his sword, his armor, his helmet, all was good. He got up on the horse and rode to the camp.
Just make up more of this kind of shit, include some battles and you gonna get your three pages, use your imagination. Dont foget about having a couple of story twists, like the main character changes the side on which he fights, or does something else.
Kuzmich
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No problem.
Kuzmich
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Girl, well women weren't really respected in Japan. But it can be someone's wife. Like then lets say Yamamoto or however you wish to call him comes back from war to his house and sees his wife. They can have a couple of dialogus. Cultural aspects, well you should know that the samurai leave to serve their emperor, so if they do something agaisnt his will they gonan have to kill themselves. They also valued honor a lot. Just make up a story, include only, decide on your cahracters and plot and then just write. I am telling you 3 pages isnt that much, you probably gonan have a hard time to end it after the 3 page, logically. The main character may comit suiside becasue of dishonor.
How about this:
first main char is a loyal samurai leading the army against the rebels. Then he realizes that his ways are wrong and joins the rebels, then he goes home meets his wife, and then goes back to rebels. He wins a battle or two and is finally captured, after that emperor orders him to commit harakiri, or suiside by sticking a sword in your stomach and cutting your organs. That how story should end, i think. But you might have better ideas. Imagination is a good thing, use it.
How about this:
first main char is a loyal samurai leading the army against the rebels. Then he realizes that his ways are wrong and joins the rebels, then he goes home meets his wife, and then goes back to rebels. He wins a battle or two and is finally captured, after that emperor orders him to commit harakiri, or suiside by sticking a sword in your stomach and cutting your organs. That how story should end, i think. But you might have better ideas. Imagination is a good thing, use it.
Kuzmich
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Thats what i said, you right.
insteresting. So how about the emeperor guys comes back and founds his wife shagging another dood and the wifes commits suicide? is that good?
its GIRI! not girls! and ON <-dept!
really apreciate your help
HEY N_! is that avatar one of thsoe house wives u were talking about?
its GIRI! not girls! and ON <-dept!
really apreciate your help
HEY N_! is that avatar one of thsoe house wives u were talking about?
Kuzmich
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What N_ said and also didnt you say that in your story there can be no sex.
Also whats Giri, describe it, i probably know what it is just the term is different in russian.
Kuzmich
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Well, i gave you some ideas, but even that would probably be to complecated for 3rd graders. Do one of those once upon the time stories.
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