So i've been working on coloring manga.

[Jimbo]

Well.. i just started today.. but yeah.

I'm hoping somone here can tell me something i need to improve on, or critique them.

And

Edit, the second piece is nowhere near done, i realise its a bit sloppy.

 

[Wing Zero]

at the moment it looks like kid pixs
but preatty good

 

[Jessanima]

Pretty Swheet. What programs are you using? Perhaps you can blur the darker skin tones just a little, esp. on the second one.

 

[Arkillo]

Shade more. Two tones doesn't work very well on larger pictures.

 

[Jimbo]

Pretty Swheet. What programs are you using? Perhaps you can blur the darker skin tones just a little, esp. on the second one.

I used phtotshop. And i know, the second one is shit...

 

[Jessanima]

nah, you just need to finish it.

 

[LordNevar]

I agree, not too shabby right now. Takes time, and I am sure you will get it down.

 

[Sly]

Wow, very nice Jim! Looks like you have some developing talent. Keep it up man.

 

[RoaCh of DisCord]

Not bad, reminds me of vector art. More tones, but yeah..not bad.

 

[vizual]

that is sexy dude keep it up

 

[PauseBreak]

Shade more. Two tones doesn't work very well on larger pictures.

I agree, more shading. 2 tones is dangerous business.