iDizzy
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- Aug 8, 2009
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Tell me what you guys think as i could do with some feedback to help. Be honest as well please thanks.
Yeah common these guys talk like gangsta but really ain't tho
Naw I aint puttin nuttin' out, I smoke when I wanna
26 inch chrome spokes on a Hummer
This heat gon last for the whole summer
Runnin your bitch faster then the Road Runner
Rocks on my wrist rolls gold under
Glocks on my hip those throw thunder
I'm buyin diamond by the pier
But when you stop, the only thing still spinnin is your hair
Yeah, I'm ridin with that all black snub
Raiders cap back all black gloves
I'm 80s man but the boy smack thugs
These record sales equal more back rubs
Not to mention I bought a pack of clubs
His impacts about as raw as crack was
Now all these new artists gettin wrong deals
I'm only 17 sittin on the pills
If you know anythin about me then you know I'm a baller
If I dont hit the first night, I aint gon' call her
I'm tryna play, you tryna have my brother
But I can't blame you for what your momma taught ya
And I don't care who the next nigger was that bought ya
Cause I ain't puttin no baguettes in yar butter
I got a diamond about as clear as water
And I got bread but I ain't spending quarters
So cut the games ma lets go in the back
Matter fact turn your ass round back a nigga down
And I ain't biast when I'm ridin through the town
Like em small like em tall like em black like em brown
She gotta be able to come when I need her
Tight ass pants little wife beater
Regular chick or R&B diva
Bitch say somethin cause I ain't a mind reader
Common Nigga Sit back and relax on 2nd thought grab a six pack
And listen to my sick rap you wana chat about your life that wick-wack?
You've always got the same exact tag like what you mother-fucking mother got on her bag
Common bitch get the docta cause you don't know who you fukin wit
I don't want ya spendin time wit me cause you ain't legit
cause your a mother fucking under achiever
Yeah common these guys talk like gangsta but really ain't tho
Naw I aint puttin nuttin' out, I smoke when I wanna
26 inch chrome spokes on a Hummer
This heat gon last for the whole summer
Runnin your bitch faster then the Road Runner
Rocks on my wrist rolls gold under
Glocks on my hip those throw thunder
I'm buyin diamond by the pier
But when you stop, the only thing still spinnin is your hair
Yeah, I'm ridin with that all black snub
Raiders cap back all black gloves
I'm 80s man but the boy smack thugs
These record sales equal more back rubs
Not to mention I bought a pack of clubs
His impacts about as raw as crack was
Now all these new artists gettin wrong deals
I'm only 17 sittin on the pills
If you know anythin about me then you know I'm a baller
If I dont hit the first night, I aint gon' call her
I'm tryna play, you tryna have my brother
But I can't blame you for what your momma taught ya
And I don't care who the next nigger was that bought ya
Cause I ain't puttin no baguettes in yar butter
I got a diamond about as clear as water
And I got bread but I ain't spending quarters
So cut the games ma lets go in the back
Matter fact turn your ass round back a nigga down
And I ain't biast when I'm ridin through the town
Like em small like em tall like em black like em brown
She gotta be able to come when I need her
Tight ass pants little wife beater
Regular chick or R&B diva
Bitch say somethin cause I ain't a mind reader
Common Nigga Sit back and relax on 2nd thought grab a six pack
And listen to my sick rap you wana chat about your life that wick-wack?
You've always got the same exact tag like what you mother-fucking mother got on her bag
Common bitch get the docta cause you don't know who you fukin wit
I don't want ya spendin time wit me cause you ain't legit
cause your a mother fucking under achiever
