If i was god

[Hot Action Akule]

If i was god for just one day
I'd accomplish nothing for man kind.
Everything id do would be for myself.
I'd demolish all my problems
I'd fix everything wrong
But i wont give a **** about you.

If i was god for a day
Everything would stop hurting
My eyes, my face, my body.
All the wrongs would be right.

 

[minny]

make starcraft 2 come out sooner

 

[Kuzmich]

[glow=red]Akule, you got no rhyme in that poem. Although the concept is good. Or is it a blank poem?[/glow]

 

[IDefy]

God* unless you meant a god.

 

[Hot Action Akule]

Not supposed to rhym, and its a piece of shit. i've written better.

 

[Gedrin]

Not all poems must rhyme. Free verse needs not rhyme and I don't think haiku needs to either.