Critique please

[concrete_sox]

ya .. gfx = dead so im posting here
linked remove due to being so noob

 

[Jimbo]

..... It's too grainy, you can't see anything besides a barb.. It needs a lot of work.. a LOT.

 

[PauseBreak]

I didn't see the barb until Jim pointed it out.

 

[concrete_sox]

thx 4 the harshness i will try next time

 

[Metal Gear Flash]

thx 4 the harshness i will try next time

lmfao...you crack me up

 

[DB]

A complete do-over.

 

[Dragnskull]

I didn't see the barb until Jim pointed it out.

same here

i like the "Scan" it does, everything else about it blows balls...i thought it was just random red and black grainy-ness until someone said something

possibly give it a delay before it moves when the scan hits the very edge(s) of the picture

 

[Flempipes]

I think its a funny idea, but not to well done

 

[PauseBreak]

The concept is good, but yeah, fix the barb. And the scan thing is cool.

 

[concrete_sox]

i couldnt find a good image!

 

[Speaker]

from 1-10 i rate it suicide

now go kill urself

 

[concrete_sox]

wow guys just give it a simple 5 and ill b on my way

 

[Renzokuken]

5

 

[jd-inflames]

1

 

[Lizardbreath]

10/10 bcuz cheese is sex.

RLY cheese it isn't that good.

 

[Zoltar]

Lawl.
Thats all i gotta say about that.

 

[concrete_sox]

5

sum1 close now pls

 

[PauseBreak]

0
And taking it down makes you noob.

 

[Flempipes]

true, taking it down means your a pussy that couldnt take the criticism

 

[Tw@]

10/10 bcuz cheese is sex.

RLY cheese it isn't that good.

pretty desperate for acceptance, aren't you?