Critique please

[Jimbo]

Yeah.. GFX = dead.. So I'm posting here.

Yes, that says JIM PRODUCTIONS. I'm going to be famous soon enough. Seriously though, thoughts? I'd like actual opinions on this. If you want to rip me apart, do it.

 

[Years]

this was made in c4d correct?

if so. nice.

if not. even nicer.

 

[Jimbo]

Just the render was from c4d, sadly, I didn't make the render though. The rest is pure photoshop.

 

[Glowy]

make me siggy jim

 

[IceDevil9]

I really like that, looks awesome, with the reflection shot, very purty.

-Frank

 

[Jimbo]

Yeah, my favorite part in that picture is probably the reflection. The colors just flow so well imo

 

[Dark Mistress]

I really like that. What's it for..?

:hop

 

[Jimbo]

Just my own personal amusement. One day the name of jim productions will be known by all though.

 

[Arkillo]

JIM WHERE THE **** IS MY L.B.S. PICTURE.

 

[PauseBreak]

What is C4D? (I'm not google I just want a quick explanation.)

I like it. I wish I could do that. I don't have photoshop but I DO have Paint.Net. Its a good small but powerful program. It doesn't have (yet) all the features that PS has but its still great for free!

 

[TroiK-]

Wow thats ****in dank

 

[Renzokuken]

The picture in the background that you used is just a little blurry, so it looks kinda gay. And at first i didn't know it was a reflection

 

[Metal Gear Flash]

i dont like the render with wireframe, it doesn't fit the backround, and the whole thing is far too grainy

 

[Ntrik_]

What flash said

and + that butterfly is really random, if you kinda made it so that the wireframe render was actually real thing, and made the butterflies fly around it, then yes it would've been much more effective

but then again, dont think that render fits the bg

 

[MacMan]

That sucks pretty hard. The reflection is entirely wrong. Uh, water ripples, dude, and the reflection needs to be sheared like a mother****er, and it's reflection should be blurrier near the shoreline. Floating butterflies have been done to death, jesus.

 

[CelestialBadger]

I missed you!!!

 

[Jimbo]

That sucks pretty hard. The reflection is entirely wrong. Uh, water ripples, dude, and the reflection needs to be sheared like a mother****er, and it's reflection should be blurrier near the shoreline. Floating butterflies have been done to death, jesus.

Pretty much exactly correct.. I noticed the reflection was way off too, but I was too lazy to fix it.. It's a wireframe floating in space, so i thought maybe I don't need to follow regular rules.

 

[concrete_sox]

its decent jimbo in future tiems u may be a pro?

 

[jd-inflames]

Far too cliche. Random abstracts that don't even make sense enough to be ABSTRACT (which pushes some boundaries, believe me), are SOOOOO last year.

 

[_Ace]

Manage lightning better, the render looks like it's going underwater but it really isn't.

Yes, I'm a bastard.