Check Out My New Game!

[Aaron7772]

Ok remember that game that i have been asking a load of questions for? guess what...IM DONE Its called "The Quest For Kag'yar" i just finished editing some of the bugs, and leveling it out more, so make sure to download 1.1! Anyway this is only my 2nd map so.....its the best i could do! BTW it has freaking 63 triggers i dont know if thats good around here, but my first one only had 3....lol.

So anyway if you see me hosting or someone else hosting, please join Anyway its a fun rpg that i think people would enjoy.

Feel free to ask questions! :rainfro

 

[Wing Zero]

y dont u host it on rapidshare

 

[Aaron7772]

How do i do that? gimme a link plz :-/

 

[Wing Zero]

www.rapidshare.de
upload it there and post the link

 

[Aaron7772]

http://rapidshare.de/files/7114387/The_Quest_For_Kag_ya_13B201.w3m.html

kk, remember this is only my 2nd map!! plus this might be too hard if your playing single player!

Please give constructive critisism and ideas. Because you guys are pros, and wont say crap like "put ultimate cheats in" or "Plz rig blue for me" and crap like that

 

[Father_Chaos]

Okay, sorry to live back up this thread, but I think you could have put a lot more work into this. Here are some points you should improve:

1)Terrain: the terrain does not look natural. Try to vary it, make hills, put more doodads. Do not just put square mountains there and there.

2)Cleaning: I hate maps that seem half finished. Just at the start, you have two heroes that take time before they can be hired. And there are two other heroes, the Mountain King and the Archmage, that have spider and wendigo pictures, which doesn't fit them, and when you choose them you get a Blood Mage for the Archmage and a Blood Warrior for the Mountain King. Also, make sure you do not make any spelling errors. There are currently plenty.

3)Story: it is an RPG. RPGs MUST have stories to be good. In your map you just go outside and kill monsters. People see this and leave your map five minutes later.

4)Levels: THE MAX LEVEL IS 5!!! What the hell? Can't even get ultimate. In an RPG, put lots of levels and make skills unique and balanced.

Sorry if the feedback was a bit rude, I just hope you will take it in account for your next maps .