Comin2TakeUAway
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i have to write a short story for my comm class. just wondering what you guys think.
PS: if you think it sucks, tell why and what i should do to change it,thnx
It was a bleak day filled with chaos. The ground was scorched with the remnants of their fallen allies. They only now know pain and suffering. This new enemy is nothing like what they faced before, they are truly unstoppable. Everything they tried, failed. Everything they will try, will fail. And in this vendetta, millions shall die. Every one vowed to keep the peace, but they didn’t keep their promise.
Men go out to join the army, navy, and even the National Guard believing that will stop this foe, only leading to death or infinite torture. The captured pray to God daily that their death will be quick, and soon. Hoping that they can find a way out, out of this hell on earth. Only to find more torture and carnage from this heartless beast.
The rest of the countries banded together to somehow slow down this plagued nation, but it was worthless. Leaders pled with this monster to try to get him to stop, they where wasting their breath. Other leaders threaten to kill him, they lost their breath. The whole world is agents this one man, and the world is failing.
Back on the field, millions are destroyed, thousands are massacred, and more are hoping to die. With the tanks firing rounds, guns shooting off and men collapsing, crying, hoping it will end. With the war ravaged ground covered in bodies, the blood red sky grabbing the tops of the mountains, and the water stained with corpses starting to boil, this one man is defying all odds. The world will fail, the world will die.
PS: if you think it sucks, tell why and what i should do to change it,thnx
It was a bleak day filled with chaos. The ground was scorched with the remnants of their fallen allies. They only now know pain and suffering. This new enemy is nothing like what they faced before, they are truly unstoppable. Everything they tried, failed. Everything they will try, will fail. And in this vendetta, millions shall die. Every one vowed to keep the peace, but they didn’t keep their promise.
Men go out to join the army, navy, and even the National Guard believing that will stop this foe, only leading to death or infinite torture. The captured pray to God daily that their death will be quick, and soon. Hoping that they can find a way out, out of this hell on earth. Only to find more torture and carnage from this heartless beast.
The rest of the countries banded together to somehow slow down this plagued nation, but it was worthless. Leaders pled with this monster to try to get him to stop, they where wasting their breath. Other leaders threaten to kill him, they lost their breath. The whole world is agents this one man, and the world is failing.
Back on the field, millions are destroyed, thousands are massacred, and more are hoping to die. With the tanks firing rounds, guns shooting off and men collapsing, crying, hoping it will end. With the war ravaged ground covered in bodies, the blood red sky grabbing the tops of the mountains, and the water stained with corpses starting to boil, this one man is defying all odds. The world will fail, the world will die.
