A short poem

[CelestialBadger]

"Grocery List"

I wrote my grocery list
As a free verse poem
And the 'two boxes of cereal'
Was a metaphor.

 

[Fei_Rushes]

deep... reeaal deep...

 

[x42bn6]

You're not being serious...*

 

[CelestialBadger]

Please stick to constructive feedback kthx

 

[cnbrood]

Please stick to constructive feedback kthx

:fwink eee.....where's the poem?

 

[Venice_native]

You're good at making bad poems.

 

[CelestialBadger]

where's the poem?

...the first post in the thread?

You're good at making bad poems.

CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK ONLY PLZ THX

 

[Venice_native]

I'm poiting out the bright side of things.

 

[CelestialBadger]

DONT MAKE ME FLAME YOU

 

[cnbrood]

eh..frankly.I dont understand this poem.

 

[CelestialBadger]

I pretend that I understand it, but only because I wrote it.

 

[lollercoasterzster]

use shreddies instead of cereal, I don't care what kind of cereal you actually get (but shreddies are better).

 

[Octopor]

I enjoyed it.