A poem made by me

[howard]

A POEM, SO READ AND RESPOND PLZ "each dawn, i rise alone, mired in ancient sorrows. Wretched and deprived of my native land, i had my mind bound with fetter. for many years, i lay hidden in the concealment of the earth, buried deep in the stone. from there, i went, abject and winter-grieving, over the surface of the waves. sorrow is a cruel companion to one who can afford few friends, and the path of exile attends this mournful spirit."

By Matt (me )

 

[RiX]

not bad but meh

 

[howard]

i know its kinda powerfull i guess i was mad when i made it or alone but what ever it was its a pretty good poem

 

[flashflores2]

I'm sorry i dont get it its to deep for me to understand.

 

[punk rock yam]

i admire your work
are you a poet?

 

[CerebralChain]

Deep, truly deep. Very well written. Almost like i don't believe that you wrote it.

 

[Ghetto_Rap_Masta]

i have a poem too

-sex and cumm
-boobz and bumm
-when i see flesh i say yum-yum
by: The pervert (a.k.a ghetto_rap_masta)

 

[YeoKeh]

lo thats funni

 

[punk rock yam]

thats a tasteless piece of shit
dont tell a girl that she'll slap you

 

[punk rock yam]

maybe youve never heard of a poem that doesnt rhyme ghetto rap masta

 

[Ghetto_Rap_Masta]

Originally posted by punk rock yam
thats a tasteless piece of shit
dont tell a girl that she'll slap you

man what happened to your sense of humor? youve changed since the day i met you on these forums. You used to be cool, now your all up-tight for some reason

 

[punk rock yam]

i unno i just like poety ALOT.

but yeah once i actually read your poem a laughed (sign off immaturity which is good )

 

[Ghetto_Rap_Masta]

lol punk, never thought of you as the culturalistic poetic type

Anyways, i can say im proud with my achievement

-sex and cumm
-boobz and bumm
-when i see flesh i say yum-yum
by: The pervert (a.k.a ghetto_rap_masta)

 

[punk rock yam]

see if you can get it published

 

[punk rock yam]

you can make a book!

Erotic Poetry
by ghetto rap masta

 

[Ghetto_Rap_Masta]

damn, that would be cool

 

[punk rock yam]

lol, id buy a copy or 2

 

[YeoKeh]

lolz

 

[Postal-Worker]

The 1st poem was Essentually "OK" but inscrutable and obscure to the idiots


Eat your vegetables kids

 

[Postal-Worker]

No comment on the 2nd poem